I talk with Stella,
She side I might should recheck my website domain, and then, trying to redo my home page images. The image should begginer than what I'm using now.
The second project images should be more cleaner and higher quality.
The contact page looks good, and the business card is also looks good
Thursday, March 16, 2017
Professional Feedback 3
Professional Feedback 3
The feedback from Loucinda White
Inconcolor @ gamil.com
1. I need to repost some images which the quality are not really good.
2. The wix website is better than the squarespace website, And I need to think about to post at least 3 projects on this websites.
3. The About page need to check the grammar.
The feedback from Loucinda White
Inconcolor @ gamil.com
1. I need to repost some images which the quality are not really good.
2. The wix website is better than the squarespace website, And I need to think about to post at least 3 projects on this websites.
3. The About page need to check the grammar.
Site Analysis 3
Site Analysis 3
1. Jessica Helgerson Interior Design
http://www.jhinteriordesign.com/
I really like this website plan. The high quality images, and the clean navigation let the web looks really clean and easy to read. Separate the portfolio to be residential and commercial can let clients really easy to find the examples which they want. And the contact page also really clean, the links are also useful. The only thing i think it can add in the contact page is to add the contact form to let people be easier to contact them.
2. Dkor Interior
https://www.dkorinteriors.com/
I think for this website is really interesting. Designer use the small images to be the navigation, and also showing the really clean label, It can let me feel be better than only use the name to show the page. Only think I think it can be improve is they should put the navigation on the top of the homepage, it will be easier to let me find the page.
3. Richard Mishaan
http://www.richardmishaan.com/
This is my best website in this week resources. The clean and useful sitemap, The high quality images, and the really concise and comprehensive profile are all really useful for my own web design. The portfolio also shows the different style and different design type, it let me really easy to find what I need.
1. Jessica Helgerson Interior Design
http://www.jhinteriordesign.com/
I really like this website plan. The high quality images, and the clean navigation let the web looks really clean and easy to read. Separate the portfolio to be residential and commercial can let clients really easy to find the examples which they want. And the contact page also really clean, the links are also useful. The only thing i think it can add in the contact page is to add the contact form to let people be easier to contact them.
2. Dkor Interior
https://www.dkorinteriors.com/
I think for this website is really interesting. Designer use the small images to be the navigation, and also showing the really clean label, It can let me feel be better than only use the name to show the page. Only think I think it can be improve is they should put the navigation on the top of the homepage, it will be easier to let me find the page.
3. Richard Mishaan
http://www.richardmishaan.com/
This is my best website in this week resources. The clean and useful sitemap, The high quality images, and the really concise and comprehensive profile are all really useful for my own web design. The portfolio also shows the different style and different design type, it let me really easy to find what I need.
Professional feedback 2
Feedback from Josh Brico
http://www.josharch.com
1, The image should be more bigger for the second project, and some images which I scanned my sketch should be higher quality.
2. The contact don't need more introduce, the page should be cleaner.
3. for my second project, I need to post more image for them, and need to check my grammar for the design statement.
4. the sitemap is good, but the navigation should use bigger size words.
http://www.josharch.com
1, The image should be more bigger for the second project, and some images which I scanned my sketch should be higher quality.
2. The contact don't need more introduce, the page should be cleaner.
3. for my second project, I need to post more image for them, and need to check my grammar for the design statement.
4. the sitemap is good, but the navigation should use bigger size words.
Thursday, February 23, 2017
Site Analysis 2
Jessica Helgerson Interior Design
http://www.jhinteriordesign.com/
This website has really complete information and high quality images. but one thing on the home page I don't like is the background images are really dark, so I can not really easy to read the black color navigation. I think the designer can reduce the transparency of the images. For other parts, I think they did really good. the site map looks really clean and easy to understand, and the information of the contact page are really easy to let me got the link to contact the company.
Martha O'Hara Interior Design
http://oharainteriors.com/
I like this website. The site map is really easy to understand, and the interesting thing is designer also create a page to introduce their different design service. It can let me know more about their work. And on designer also post the contact number and email address on every page, I think it can let people contact them to be easier.
Amber Interiors
http://amberinteriordesign.com/
For the home page of this website, I think it show too many information on this page, and let me feel so busy on one page. But for other pages, I think they did really good. The clean navigation, high quality images, and completed information can let me know more about the website, and also can let me easy to get the contact information.
http://www.jhinteriordesign.com/
This website has really complete information and high quality images. but one thing on the home page I don't like is the background images are really dark, so I can not really easy to read the black color navigation. I think the designer can reduce the transparency of the images. For other parts, I think they did really good. the site map looks really clean and easy to understand, and the information of the contact page are really easy to let me got the link to contact the company.
Martha O'Hara Interior Design
http://oharainteriors.com/
I like this website. The site map is really easy to understand, and the interesting thing is designer also create a page to introduce their different design service. It can let me know more about their work. And on designer also post the contact number and email address on every page, I think it can let people contact them to be easier.
Amber Interiors
http://amberinteriordesign.com/
For the home page of this website, I think it show too many information on this page, and let me feel so busy on one page. But for other pages, I think they did really good. The clean navigation, high quality images, and completed information can let me know more about the website, and also can let me easy to get the contact information.
Professional Feedback
Professional Feedback from Josh Brincko
Home Page:
Need to change my logo and background color, the color looks not really clean.
The background image should be bigger
About Page:
The introduction shouldn't be too long, The words need to be bigger, let people easy to read.
Should put blog and Linkedln link on this page.
Contact page:
should only keep one contact form
Resume Page:
The issuu image should on the middle of the page. and should be smaller.
Home Page:
Need to change my logo and background color, the color looks not really clean.
The background image should be bigger
About Page:
The introduction shouldn't be too long, The words need to be bigger, let people easy to read.
Should put blog and Linkedln link on this page.
Contact page:
should only keep one contact form
Resume Page:
The issuu image should on the middle of the page. and should be smaller.
Thursday, February 16, 2017
Week 7 Peer Critique
The Feedback for XiaoTong Yuan
https://www.xiaotongyuan.com/
https://www.xiaotongyuan.com/
I like the organize of the cover page, looks clean and easy to read, but I suggest to change another image of the coverage.
For the navigation, I think you might can add more on that. Now, you only have HOME and SHOP, you can add IMAGE, CONTACT, RESUME as well.
The most important thing I think you can change is put all of your project images in your IMAGE page, but not the HOME page, because now your page like me really easy to miss your project images.
The Feedback for Philip Yeoman
I really like your logo of your website. I don't think your navigation and Homepage have any problem. they are clean and easy to read. only one thing I think you can change, which is in your Portfolio page, your image cube looks to much, you can only post one image of your each project, not all of them on one page.
The Feedback for Philip Yeoman
I really like your logo of your website. I don't think your navigation and Homepage have any problem. they are clean and easy to read. only one thing I think you can change, which is in your Portfolio page, your image cube looks to much, you can only post one image of your each project, not all of them on one page.
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